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He was the football star on their Highschool team.
She was a shy, small town girl, living in her own little world.
She was afraid to talk to him, she new he'd never love her back.
She watched from a distance and pretended not to care.
One day he decided to go to a dance without all his friends.
He spotted her from across the room.
Her brown hair curly, long and flowing.
Her blue eyes sparkled everytime she laughed.
If only he could make her laugh like that.
He gained the courage and asked her if he could have this dance.
Her eyes sparkled with pleasure and desire.
His smile seemed to make her heart beat faster.
They were so young.
Their love so innocent and sweet.
She found herself telling things she had never been able to anyone before.
He was surprized how she wanted to know the real him not just the football star.
When they went back to school they told their friends the story.
The jocks on his team called the Montagues were angry, why would he hang out with the goth chich like her?
They told him she wasn't good enough for him.
The goth's were angry also.
They new she was going to get heart broken.
The goths were called the Capulets.
Hatred grew among the to groups.
They were blinded with such fury and anger.
Juilet wept her only love had sprung from her only hate.
They met in secret.
He called to her from her house.
Juilet called to Romeo "Oh Romeo! Wherefore out thou Romeo? Deny thy father and refuse thy name."
Romeo "Call me but love, and henceforth I'll never be Romeo."
Juilet heard her parents calling.
Juliet whispered I will say good night till it be morrow.
They made plans to meet in a gareden on Romeo's property, they would be wed.
Their marrage was a secret.
Romeo gave Juliets older brother a black eye and a couple right hooks.
Her brother had beaten his best friend.
"Juliet!" Romeo called.
"My parents will never allow us to be together after what you did." Juliet replied with much remorse
"Just meet me at the garden. I beg you Juliet." Romeo pleaded.
Juliet nodded her head.
Juliet faked running away.
Romeo never recieved the letter about the plan.
Filled with sorrow he drove onto the highway.
Planning to die.
He crashed head on into a fence and was flung through the windsheild.
Juliet got into her old truck and went to find Romeo.
She saw his car by the old fence.
She say Romeo lying dead.
Tears fell across her face.
"Oh shard of glass let this be thy sheath!" Juliet whispered.
Their family and friends found them the next day.
The two groups promised to never let this happen again.
There never was a tale of such woe of that of Juliet and her Romeo...
Guys I thought this turned out really bad...





Character and origonal story belong to William Shakespeare
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beccabear12's avatar
Romeo and Juliet. I've never read, but I still know the story.
My first thought when I started reading this was 'Don't Stop Believing'. The good version (Journey)